Score: 7

"Hah... not too bad, for a quickie..."

submission: Samus Takes a Break!

date: March 24, 2005

My only gripe is that you should've left Samus' visor on when she and Luigi 'turned out the lights'. It could be flashing suggestivly, if you want.

Score: 6

"That was... interesting..."

submission: Sad Jimmy

date: March 24, 2005

Hey, why are you giving him all those spongebob accessories, do you want to turn the little guy gay? Hah. Well, it was okay, I guess, but adding about twice as many options would be a good move, as would allowing the 'gifts' to accumulate - if you give him a hat, it stays on until you blow his brains out. If you give him a lolly, he keeps on sucking it until you punch a couple of holes through his head.

You get the idea.

Score: 3

"What was the point of that?"

submission: Grandma & Pals

date: March 24, 2005

Well, what little you've got looks good... I don't get it, why would you submit something that isn't finished? And is Bowser supposed to have a gray box around him that's a different shade than the background? And why does the music keep playing long after the movie has aborted itself?

Score: 7

"not too shabby."

submission: INCREDIGENT

date: March 1, 2005

Starts a bit abruptly, doesn't it? But this beat is pretty cool... the parts where it skips are kind of cool (I assume those're supposed to be in there, right?) but sort of throw off the beat for a moment in a few places... thirty seconds in to it is a good example. I like the part at 1:50, though.

Neat stuff - perfect music for a flash movie.

Score: 5

"Dark world of fruity loops."

submission: Zelda Dark World Remake

date: October 25, 2004

Hmmm... I don't know. This isn't very well put together... I mean, all the synths and stuff sound cool, but they don't sound cool together.

The plucked plugin sounds kind of out of place with all the other sounds being strictly synth, don't you think? You may want to consider changing that, maybe even to one of the DX10 presets? That could be cool...

The drums in the background are pretty cool, but you can't really hear them, and they're repetitive. Maybe that's what you were going for, but I think it could use a little more work.

Basicly, this sounds amature-ish. Which makes sense - it seems like you're new to FL. So keep working at it - the more you use the program the better you'll get. For now, this only gets a five overall.

Score: 6

"I love fruity loops. Everyone should."

submission: Trigger

date: October 25, 2004

I'm a Fruity Loops guy myself so this should be interesting...

Okay, that sounds like the 'plucked' vst, oh, and simsynth...

Actually, this song reminds me a lot of my earlier stuff when I was just messing around, trying to figure out how everything worked.

Nice use of the bass there, I like how it's understated, but it works.

The melody... is kind of hard to follow, I guess... some of it sounds really kind of random, some of it's definatly dischordant, and the rest is pretty respectable.

The drums are a bit basic, but that's not really a bad thing... I like the cool little rolls that you've got starting around :58, by the way.

So overall... this gets a six. Not because it's bad, or anything, but because I'll bet after messing around for another week you could have something better. And the same goes for the week after that, etc. Keep it up - you've definatly got potential.